Friday, November 25, 2011

Darkness and Light sneak peek #2

"well your five moons old" Shadowpelt said when Strangekit had asked about when she would become a apprentice "so one more moon and you'll be old enough" "really!" Strangekit bounced around the nursery with excitement! "Strangekti!" Shadowpet said "watch out for Fernnoes's kits!" Strangekit stopped her bouncing and walked back over to her siblings "Sorry Fernnose" Strangekit said. Fernnose smiled "thats ok Strangekit" "have you named your kits yet?" Dovekit asked the Black she-cat walked over the the queen and looked at the new kits Strangekit joined her sister and looked at the new kits "yes" Fernnose said she pointedwith her tail to the fist stripped kit "this is Toadkit" then she pointed to the grey kit next to him "this is Stromkit, and this" Fernnose pointed to her third kit "this is Leafkit" Fernnose smiled with pride. "they're beautiful!" Dovekit said. "thank you" Fernnose said Strangepelt and Dovekit walked back to Shadowpelt and started to play with Oakkit and Poppykit "wait till im an apprentice!" Oakkit said "all the other clans with shake with fear when they see me coming to defend my clan!" "oh yeah!" Strangkit said "i bet i could take you!" and she jumped onto Oakkit and bit his ear. Oakkit fought back, he pined Strpangekit to the ground and started to claw at her belly. push him off! a voice said to Strangekit. push him off! the voice said again, Strangekit dug her back paws into Oakkits belly fur and pushed him into the air and almost threw him across the nursery. "Strangekit!" Shadpwpelt said, Strangkit saw the look of sock on her mothers face. Fernnose had the same look of surprise that a kit would have that much strength. "how did you do that?!" Dovekit said "that was the most-" well done. a voice said. Strangekit shook here head but the voice didn't leave. "-impressive thing iv seen!" Dovekit finished "Strangekit" Poppykit said "why did you-" you have a warriors talent the voice said again, "-push Oakkit off?!" Leave here alone! "Strangekit?" Get out of here Dovecloud! "Strangekit whats wro-" she's just a kit! stop teaching her what she dosen't need to know! the voices of Strangekits siblings and her mother faded away as the two voices one a she-cat and one a tom argued in Stragnekits head. soon the two voices got so loud that Strangekit could no longer think! Strangekit shook her head and covered her ears with her paws "STOP!" Strangekit screamed and suddenly the voices vanished and Strangekit was back in the nursery, and all the cats were staring at her with concern.


sorry this part is so shot but it a interesting part :)

story and all characters are (c) to me! NO STEALING!

2 comments:

  1. cool! I can't wait to see the whole thing!

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  2. Wow it is really good maybe u should make a movie about how did the grouch stole chirstmas ! xD love , Cutiepielps

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